Let me tell you guys about my friend guys.

[plornive]

I thoroughly enjoyed your story. In fact, I think it is based on a true story and I give you two thumbs up. I do, however, suggest that your friend take a trip to the local STD clinic. He can probably score some more fatties there.

 

[WODIN]

You must have BALLS OF STEEL.

 

[juiceddreadlocks]

and wodin wonders how he ever got here.

 

[WODIN]

and wodin wonders how he ever got here.

Shut ya cake stuffer ya mullet headed noobie.

 

[CipherLock]

So you drove home after 15 beers? Drunk driving, tsk,tsk.

The story started out really well and there was some good humour to the first 3/5 of it, but the nasty sex detail wan't real enough and the hate on fat chicks was a little thick.

It lost the shine at 4am.

Overall I mark it as 74%.

 

[juiceddreadlocks]

Shut ya cake stuffer ya mullet headed noobie.

 

[juiceddreadlocks]

So you drove home after 15 beers? Drunk driving, tsk,tsk.

The story started out really well and there was some good humour to the first 3/5 of it, but the nasty sex detail wan't real enough and the hate on fat chicks was a little thick.

It lost the shine at 4am.

Overall I mark it as 74%.

too bad the story didnt involve a menstruating fatty. that would have been even better if he would have gone down on her while she was

 

[matto18]

there's nothing like going down on a fat bleeding hatchet wound. its like getting a facefull of raw warm ground beef.

 

[dzuljas]

hahaha thanks for the response guys. The story is about 70 percent true. I wrote this paper for my sex ed class, its supposed to be some type of fantasy and the teacher has to read it in front of the class.

I did wakeup to find my friend fucking this chick and they were both moaning like gorillas. But all the choking and the girl crying was made up. We didnt kick her out, she left when she discovered that I was in the room. We didnt push her down the stairs or anything like that.

I'm going to revise the story a little bit for my class and take the assault part out, mabye ill just have him put bruises on her ass lol. The funny part is, these papers are to be handed in anonymously and the teacher is going to read every students' paper to the class.

 

[dzuljas]

too bad the story didnt involve a menstruating fatty. that would have been even better if he would have gone down on her while she was

hahaha a menstruating fattie! i may have to add that in