Rap experts?

[yonkers weights]

Dude I like the concept but a lot of works needs to be done. A LOT.
Hit me up when you got something more.

whatcha think of these characters grandmaster biteme?

lead singer: a ripped hardcore rapper...who likes mariachi music,and has a fat white wife at home, who he hides from the media.

rap band member #2: hardcore gangsta rapper. but in relaity, a nerd who plays video games at home, loves astronomy, and drinks tea after shows. but in magazines, brags he's lived from the streets and has 'ho's.

rap band member #3: womanizing fat black rapper. always arguing. like larry david from curb your enthusiasm. takes things so seriously. kinda like the dwight of the office.

rap band member #4: white fat rapper. the 'token white member'. running joke in the movie: people keep sayin "i didn't know rap bands needed a token white guy". he's alos the most serious and knows most about 'rap', and writes all the songs. he's also "white".

manager: sleazy old white guy. loves to argue back. think a jon lovitz character.

i'll work more on the characters later.

r

 

[NateNeedsFatToMuscle?]

here make me the token white guy lol

shit rappers usually come with ego's and attitude problems, a lot of comedy could be used between them and certain promoters as far as how good they are vs how good they think they are.

hmm try allhiphop.com

what are you using? final draft 7? I just downloaded that last night and wrote a sample page for practice.

 

[Razorguns]

Dude I like the concept but a lot of works needs to be done. A LOT.
Hit me up when you got something more.

yep. but i'm looking fwd ot that. plus i'm in no hurry

thanks

r

 

[NateNeedsFatToMuscle?]

so wussup R U using final draft 7 or another program? freetyping it? I got the link if you need FD7 its industry standard from what Ive heard?

 

[Razorguns]

so wussup R U using final draft 7 or another program? freetyping it? I got the link if you need FD7 its industry standard from what Ive heard?

movie magic screenwriter or whatever it's called. u got fd7? send it over brotha

r

 

[Lestat]

good luck with it bro!

 

[NateNeedsFatToMuscle?]

movie magic screenwriter or whatever it's called. u got fd7? send it over brotha

r

I got it here the other night it works fine I can save and all that good neccesarry stuff lol

http://www.mininova.org/

just type in final draft 7 good luck bra