Lulu's Journey on The Shadow Project

[treilin]

Thanks for the heads up, Bunny. I think I need to do some research on muscle use in relation to this explosive training.

Let me know



Believing she's capturing spirits with a magic lantern, an ostracized, backwoods girl stumbles upon a portable transistor TV only to discover she can affect the broadcasted programming, including stopping a forecasted catastrophe approaching the area.

I like this one

A stroke victim needs the help of Jack Pine Gypsies to herd his only friends, wild mustangs, from Statusphere Bowl before a methane mining company releases toxic water into the basin.
I think this one could be a bit more catchy written another way. I'm not a writer...

A methane mining company is about to release toxic water into the basin of
Statusphere Bowl, will Jack Pine Gypsies help a stroke victim herd his only friends, wild mustangs, in time? Or will the lethal liquid devour them all?

I'm not sure if you are trying to make someone want to think they have to come see this play/read a book... but catchy lines and cliff hangers work well on me...

 

[jenscats5]

Hey Lu - just checking in....

 

[LuluDeren]

Hi Gymgurl, Treilin, and Jenscats! :hug: x 3

Let me know

Thanks Treil, that would be greatly appreciated if you could post some links

Believing she's capturing spirits with a magic lantern, an ostracized, backwoods girl stumbles upon a portable transistor TV only to discover she can affect the broadcasted programming, including stopping a forecasted catastrophe approaching the area.

I like this one

A stroke victim needs the help of Jack Pine Gypsies to herd his only friends, wild mustangs, from Statusphere Bowl before a methane mining company releases toxic water into the basin.
I think this one could be a bit more catchy written another way. I'm not a writer...

A methane mining company is about to release toxic water into the basin of
Statusphere Bowl, will Jack Pine Gypsies help a stroke victim herd his only friends, wild mustangs, in time? Or will the lethal liquid devour them all?

I'm not sure if you are trying to make someone want to think they have to come see this play/read a book... but catchy lines and cliff hangers work well on me...

I really appreciate you reading my loglines, Treil. I'm glad you like the girl and transistor tv one, that's my favorite, too.

Also, great improvement you made on the mining company logline....I'm gonna change it. I am trying to submit something that the judges will forward into the filmmaking competition so you're right, it needs to be VERY catchy. Tankyyyyyyyyyyy

 

[LuluDeren]

Well, I'm a big slob....and I blame it all on Thanksgiving and the trimmings, starting with a tin of sugared candy fruit slices.

On a good note, I just got my Marcy bench delivered....finally, I can do proper leg extensions and curls!

 

[*Bunny*]

How did you come up with those ideas for the scripts? Pretty creative Lulu.

Glad you enjoyed Tday Yay new toys!!

 

[florencia]

 

[LuluDeren]

How did you come up with those ideas for the scripts? Pretty creative Lulu.

Glad you enjoyed Tday Yay new toys!!

Thanks Bunny! That is what happens when I have too much sugar....and commit my semi-state ramblings to paper:lol:

Hey Florencia!!!:huggies:

 

[florencia]

Hi LuLu!!! Thanks for your coment on my log...As always well appreciated!
Are you freezing @ the mountains? keep layers of clothing and avoid that sugar...when you crave something sweet....JUST lick your finger...:wink: sugar!!!LOL

 

[LuluDeren]

Great advice, Flor! Last week was pretty cold...some single digits fahrenheit, right now-a BALMY 38 degrees F.

On a sadder note...my mom just called to inform me that a distant cousin (third) has been killed in Iraq. He was only 22 years old and was, apparently, killed by a roadside bomb...we have no further news other than they think other Minnesotans were killed from his company. I had never meet Bryan but it's very sad to think his life was cut short. Please keep him, along with all our troops, in your prayers. Thank you, Ladies.

 

[Ilk]

Sorry to hear that Lulu!!

Awww... Such a shame...

Thoughts are with you...