A song I wrote for my unborn baby..what do you think?

[rykertest]

So I used to write songs for fun, not to be famous but since my wife in "el prego" it just kind of came back to me on my way to the store and this was what I wrote down in about 5 minutes. Does it come thru ok or sound dumb? She hasn't read it yet and I don't have any music for it either but I'm working on that.

Brand New

A heart beat, a little heart beat just races towards it's life,
nothing to say or even think, but it's inside my wife...my life,
it's hard to fathom and hard to take in, but lifes about to begin,

it's all about to begin, to start anew
to begin with a little me, and a little you,
to start with someone so brand new

I need a name, I need a change of mind
I have to think about all thats right,
the wonder, the shock, the stun of it all,
I guess I'll have to learn to crawl,

it's all about to begin, to start anew
to begin with a little me, and a little you,
to start with someone so brand new

so brand new, gods brand new soul,
it? he? she?...I just don't know,
does this mean I am a dad now
or just some guy this baby knows?

it's all about to begin, to start anew
to begin with a little me, and a little you,
to start with someone so brand new

Our lives are about to change for you.

 

[pdaddy]

 

[rykertest]

that bad huh? hhhhmmm......that sucks.

 

[PICK3]

I like it!

 

[pdaddy]

just kidding bor, it's really sweet.

Everytime I take my daughter for a walk I sing to her and just make shit up. Finally found myself repeating the same song, it's a nice thing to have throughout the years.

 

[rykertest]

just kidding bor, it's really sweet.

Everytime I take my daughter for a walk I sing to her and just make shit up. Finally found myself repeating the same song, it's a nice thing to have throughout the years.

It's hard to not be cheesy and I really feel all icky when I write that kind of stuff, but it's what comes out when I put pen to paper. I guess I'm just icky inside. lol

 

[PICK3]

I kind of welled up thinking about the little heart beat.

 

[pdaddy]

I kind of welled up thinking about the little heart beat.

fag

 

[rykertest]

I kind of welled up thinking about the little heart beat.

seriously...really?

It was wierd but she started telling me about the little heart beat and how it was just racing along at a good pace and it didn't make me tear up....but I felt funny in a good way. Kinda happy in a somber way if that makse sense???

 

[PICK3]

seriously...really?

It was wierd but she started telling me about the little heart beat and how it was just racing along at a good pace and it didn't make me tear up....but I felt funny in a good way. Kinda happy in a somber way if that makse sense???

No ... not really. I have a pair you know.