i wrote this.

[Humble Pride]

very well written................

 

[javaguru]

very well written................

More importantly, would you hit it?

 

[fistfullofsteel]

bullshit on reading that

 

[Humble Pride]

More importantly, would you hit it?

"always".................

 

[stilleto]

nice writing!

did you want me to point out the typos?

yes!
oh, and thank you.

i start drooling when i read it now. I've gone retarded.

 

[stilleto]

well first of all, i'll give you all candy.

second, when you write an article, you often have to follow a certain direction. I"m writing this for a company that doesn't just recycle computers, but buys them from corporations and resells them. so even though it's for an IT magazine, it has to focus on one option for IT buyers.

i can't say "green is shit". I have to say, "green doesn't have to be shit...."

 

[stilleto]

i see a typo!!!!!
"has states" instead of "has stated".

 

[BlueBird]

I like it. I think you've generated interest in what the company *XXX* does, objectively, and without proselytization on why the customer should go green or not.

 

[stilleto]

I like it. I think you've generated interest in what the company *XXX* does, objectively, and without proselytization on why the customer should go green or not.

ah, thank you.
you hit the nail on the head with what my objective was.

 

[Smurfy]

i see a typo!!!!!
"has states" instead of "has stated".

yes, in paragraph 2 and in paragraph 8.

also in paragraph 1, i think should be "re-using your COMPANY'S" instead of "re-using your companies"