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How STAR WARS could have been perfect if they accepted my Edit of the story line

OMEGA

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OK biggest flaw in the movie:


1)we all know the Jedi need Anakin since he has the MOST LATENT POTENTIAL of power than all of the Jedi in recent history, they need him because in the wrong hands he would be a tool for evil possibly, but also times are unpredictable and the Jedi counsel new they needed all the help they could get.

2) now he started his training past the normal age and his powers seemed to transcend normal Jedi traiing, he is constantly put in check by Obi one and the counsel to "Discipline" himself and to be patient. However when they disciplined him they did it often without explanation, and much like a cold parent would there child ( ala go to your room style discpline with no explanation).

3) At first he did not mind but then as he became self aware of his powers the counsel was even more firm with him, almost daring his to backlash. They never said "look we know your powerfull, you know it as well, we are tying to help you here is why......."


4) Palapatine is the perefect Seducer and led Anakin away from the counsel in effective fashion, however here is where the story could have been better written.


A) Anakin should have found out that the Emporer was in fact Sideuos through his knowledge of the force, he should have let Sideous live by making a choice only to do so till he learned the power of ressurection/ and or any powrfull teachings of Sideous
has to circumvent his Wifes impending doom.

B) he should have known this privatly and maybe leaked it too Obi One, who then leaked it to the counsel who then became even more supeciuos of Anakin ( all of this should have been done semi privatley)

C)Palpatine should have sensed this, then began to cause more Rebell incursions as sideous. ( no one know he is the cause of both factions in the WAR)

D) Palpatine then sends Imperial troop to crush a large part of the Rebellion, and Victory should soon be in the Jedi's grasp.

E) Sideous/Palapatine then discusses how he too wants the rebellion to be stopped to Anakin, and Anakin being battle weary and also concerned about his wife, and tired of the Jedi counsel should also have a yearing to see it end ( he does not know that Sideuos is the cause of the war on both ends depite being the chosen one) he does know who Palpatine /Sideuos is and hopes the war is over soon so he can learn the powers of resurection and other powers he has too and then dispose of him.

F) the final big reble / imperial war should take place near his wifes home world. the Jedi even more distrusting don't want Anakin near any real last important campaigns since they feel they can take care of it now, plus he is a liability.

Anakin becomes infuriated when he finds out the counsel really don't trust him and do not let him go to the last war front we he is proven to make a difference, he bcomes even more angry that the battle is near his wifes home world where she is, again he is most angry that he and all his power can crush the rebellion once and for all so Peace reigns, he can learn what he has to from Sidoius, then get rid of him, (say to hell with the Jedi possibly) and live with his wife happliy ever after

G) however he cant do that since JEDI orders dontl let him go to the front,
then the last war starts, but the Rebellion is stonger than expected the Jedi have to retreat, and Anakins wife gets killed by a Rebel bomb

then Palpatine/ Sidous comes and is the first to tell him the "news" and seduces him by saying "wow if you went this war would be over, and I could teach you faster, and peace will reign but I am sorry the rebellion is still ongoing oh and by the way you wife is dead, if only you were there"

this sole INSTANCE would have been the impetus for Anakin to become Darth Vader, hate the rebellion and favor a police state universe, and completely HATE THE JEDI who kept his power at bay for what he percieves as THEIR ego, where if he had gone his wife would have been saved, the rebellion over, and Sidiuos diposed of


THERE

1 million dollars please
 
I think the only realy corny parts were with anakin and Paday, but those corny parts were the main reason he chose to go to the dark side. He was promised that her life would be saved.
I loved the movie dang
 
OMEGA, wouldn anakin sense palpatine is lying that padme' is dead?

I think what would happen there is he get pissed off and sick of the lies and he kills palpatine, and yealls "RRAARGH I AM NOW DARTH VADERRR!!"

The film will then cut to him going to some crazy science guy and shelling out money for them to make him a cool black outfit (it'll show him getting measured for the suit and such) and then when they finally make it, it shows him lacing it all up one piece at a time a-la Rambo movies until finally he puts on the helmet and the camera does a real fast zoom out so you can see his entire figure, and he stands there just breathing and with all this light and smoke around him.
 
Burning_Inside said:
OMEGA, wouldn anakin sense palpatine is lying that padme' is dead?

I think what would happen there is he get pissed off and sick of the lies and he kills palpatine, and yealls "RRAARGH I AM NOW DARTH VADERRR!!"

The film will then cut to him going to some crazy science guy and shelling out money for them to make him a cool black outfit (it'll show him getting measured for the suit and such) and then when they finally make it, it shows him lacing it all up one piece at a time a-la Rambo movies until finally he puts on the helmet and the camera does a real fast zoom out so you can see his entire figure, and he stands there just breathing and with all this light and smoke around him.
would be no reason to make episodes 4-6 then, he would of fullfilled his destiny right there
 
if you idiots could get over my typos and mispellings you will see i wrote the perfect story line.

this is my personal revision get past the typos and mispelling

I was flustered when wrote it

its a HELL of alot more convining then what I saw in the movie

in the old movies Darth Vader

hated the Jedi, any semblance of a Rebellion, and being good

if he was indeed a Jedi I gave the Motivation for a real turn to the darkside

not that bullshit brainwash crap we saw in the movie

it shoudl have been a choice and I gave the motivation for it

and if you see the old versions what I propose ties right into the story line
 
Am I the only one who thinks the first two movies were not even needed? He could've just carried the entire story in this 3rd movie and be done with it. Chapters 1-2 were not exciting enough to warrant 2 3 hour movies imho.

This movie was the only one needed -- and it shows by how cool it was.
 
I thought it was a great movie. I liked the way they turned Anakin. From reading the reviews i thought it was stupid that he turned because of his wifes impending death, but they did it well. I mean he was definately evil after he turned and not as weenie as i thought they were gonna make it. Either way it was the third best movie out of the six only behind the first two. It was definately better than return of the jedi.
 
OMEGA said:
and?

it sucked

could have easily been a great movie

Well you couldn't of been that dissapointed after the last two shitty films George Lucas did..

Phantom Menace...sucked.
Attack of the clones...sucked
Revenge of the sith.....(you fill in the blank)

Honestly did you REALLY have your hopes up? :rolleyes:
 
Wootoom said:
Star Wars has a new movie out?


I guess your not up to par on new events when your busy taking lives... Oh yeah, there was also a major sunami that claimed the lives of 250,000 people.. Just thought I'd let you know since you don't get out much.. :p

Wait? Why the fuck am I doing this? Isn't this Lestat's Job?
 
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